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小伙伴们，今天领导交代给我任务。让我写一篇雇佣确认函，我还不会写呢，你们有人会写吗？

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Skill：掌握雇佣确认函的结构及写作要点。

阅读下面的一篇完整的雇佣确认函，请认真阅读并学习它的结构。

根据雇佣确认函，试着回答下面的问题吧。

4/16/2015

Century Apartment Complex

21 Century Lane

Springfield, MO 13234

Subject: Letter of Employment Confirmation for John Brown.

Dear Mr. Brown,

We are pleased to inform that you are offered the post of Software Tester in TBC Microsoft Company. You are requested to report to the manager on 5th May, 2015.

Your salary will be $1000 per month. It covers standard group benefit plans and fringe benefits. The breakup of salary will be provided to you on the day of joining. For the first year, you will be entitled to a pro-rated vacation time.

Please sign the enclosed letter if you agree to the specified terms and conditions. Looking forward to having you.

Sincerely,

Jim Robinson

1. Who employs whom?

2. What is the post for Mr. Brown?

3. What will be the salary of the job?

1. Jim Robinson employs John Brown.

2. Software Tester.

3. $1,000 per month.

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请根据下面的提示，写一封完整的雇佣确认函（下面的Workplace Tip也许会帮到你哦）。

• Mr. John Smith wants to employ Mr. Bill Green.

• The post is product tester.

• Bill Green has successfully passed the six months probation period.

• The salary will be $1,200 per month with effect from the confirmation date.

• In case of any clarifications, please reach the manager.

• Information of the manager:

Tel: +10-20-42128452

E-mail: sales@jsgefei.com

• Address of John Smith: Room 7029, Pennsylvania Street, London.

Post Code: 329183.

Dec. 4, 2015

Room 7029

Pennsylvania Street

London, 329183

Dear Mr. Bill Green,

During the six months probation period with our company, we have reviewed and are pleased with your performance. You have achieved all your targets and finished all your work in time. Even your immediate superior has all words of praises for you.

We are happy to inform you that you have been confirmed to the position of product tester at our company. Your salary has been revised to $1,200 per month with effect from the confirmation date which indicates the cost to company and other benefits.

All other terms and conditions as detailed in your appointment letter remain unchanged.

In case of any clarifications, please reach your manager. We sincerely look forward to your association with our company and are confident that you will use the opportunity for further improving the growth of your career.

Congratulations on your continuous success.

Regards,

John Smith

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Workplace Tip

Tips for Employment Confirmation Letter(雇佣确认函写作技巧)

An employment confirmation letter is written by an employer to address a new employee regarding confirmation of his/her job. When writing an employment confirmation letter, it is important to keep it simple and clear. You need to have the following information:

• Current Date

• Your contact information

• Greeting

• Opening line with the employee's name, your company name and their hire date

• The compensation information, including the term (weekly, bi-weekly, annual, etc.)

• An offer to be available for answering any questions

• Closing

A few more notes:

• Don't forget to sign the letter.

• Only include salary information if it is specifically requested.

• Keep the letter simple and short. Do not disclose any unnecessary information.

• Print the letter on your letterhead.

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